So you have decided that you want to write a book.
Cool.
You grab some paper, pens, jot down a few ideas, maybe outline something, then you get going.
You write a story, and it's the coolest thing you've ever written.
It's not good enough.
Sorry, but it's true.
Let me tell you a personal story in which I learned this lesson the hard way.
When I was 16, I wrote this fantastic story. The characters lived in my head. I ate, drank, and breathed this story. It was my life.
I finally finished the first copy when I was 17.
It was perfect. I couldn't think of a thing that needed to be changed.
Then I gave it to my brother, who is a fantasy book expert. (not really).
He wrote all over it, told me what he really thought about it.
Apparently it wasn't as perfect as I thought it was.
I did what any author would tell you to do.
I put the book away for a few months, then got it back out and started editing with fresh eyes.
Boy, was my brother right! There was so much wrong with it.
After I edited it, I put it away again.
This time, it stayed away for a year.
In that time, I began writing other things, expanding and honing my skills.
While I learned a great deal, I still knew next to nothing about actually writing a book. (Though I thought I knew it all, because I had read about writing, and obviously I was a natural born talent).
Well, a year later I realized the book wasn't really worth keeping.
So I stared over. I opened a new word document and I redid the whole thing from scratch.
Of course, the characters were still in my head. Most of the story was too.
So it was easier this time.
But it was also harder. Because I knew I had a draft already, and that draft lived in my head too.
It was hard to remember what was in the original draft and what was in this draft.
When I was halfway done with the book, I decided that I needed to stop referencing the old draft and literally write from scratch.
I gave the copy to my brother. I jokingly told him I would sign it for him so if I was ever famous, he could sell it and get a lot of money. I gave him the copy and wiped it out of my mind.
Four years and two more drafts later, my harddrive crashed.
My entire story was gone. I gave up.
I pushed the characters and the plot into the back of my mind to die there.
I had been so dedicated to this book. I had drawn maps, and made up my own language and planet, and it had let me down.
I was complaining about it one day when my brother comes out of his room with this:
I was completely shocked. I thought I had thrown it away.
He said, "Remember? You autographed it for me so that when you published it, I could sell it for lots of money."
He made it seem like he was only in it for the money, but he had kept my manuscript for four years.
FOUR.
YEARS.
It was then that I finally realized that my characters would never die, because I still had a story to tell.
I began writing it again. Four and a half years after the original draft that I thought was so perfect, I completed my third draft.
This time, I was fortunate enough to find a site called inkpop. I posted my book to it right away and began asking for other writer's opinions.
The advice they gave me was priceless. I grew so much talking to these people and learning what they had to offer me and my story.
It has been almost six years since I began this story. It may be another six until I finish it.
The characters' names have all been changed. Characters left, characters came.
The title and nearly the whole plot is completely different.
But the souls of the characters are still there. The essence of the story is the very same.
Who knows how many more years and re-writes this book will need.
But one day, the story will be told.
I have used this blog for many things. I have used it for personal stories and funny jokes. The main purpose, however, is to teach you how to write.
The most important lesson I could ever teach you, though, is the one I hope you got from this.
I hope that today I have not taught you how to write, but why to write.
Write because you have a story the world has not heard before.
Write because people believe in you.
Write because you CAN do it.
Write because you believe in yourself.
Monday, December 12, 2011
Thursday, August 4, 2011
Using a Book to Write a Book
OK, you're all going to hate me for this, but YES, I'm using yet another Harry Potter reference.
This might possibly be the last one for a while.
Most definitely not the last one ever, though.
I couldn't NOT blog about Harry Potter like I couldn't NOT breathe.
The end result would be something like this:
So anyways. The books I'm going to be using as examples is the Harry Potter series.
No groans from the peanut gallery.
The reason I'm using these is simple: they're the third best seller OF ALL TIME.
Obviously she was onto something.
Now when I say "use a book to write a book" I don't mean have it open on your desk ready to use its ideas.
What I mean by that is that you should study the book. Watch its patterns, characters, etc.
I've already blogged about patterns in the HP series, now we're going to watch the author's behavior while writing the books.
Don't give me that look, I didn't mean hide in her closet while she works. Sheesh.
She's blogged while writing, done interviews on the way she writes, etc.
Her advice goes something like this:
1. LOVE what you write, it WILL become you.
In other words, you are part of your book. J.K. Rowling didn't put herself into the Wizarding World of Harry Potter, but we still associate it with her as though she had.
2. If you need a break, take one.
While you are taking a much needed break from your story, play a game on your computer. Minesweeper (like Jo) or solitaire (like me) or any other calming game pre-loaded on your computer. And I do mean calming. Don't play a game that boils your blood. You probably won't recover much writing that way.
3. Write while you're waiting to write.
I mean write other things. Build up the world, write character backgrounds, do something.
While writing your book's equivalent of the Hogwarts Sorting Hat scene, you get stumped. Don't stare at the computer screen. Start writing the background of the hat, or of the kid under the hat. This stuff may not ever make it into the book... but you'll have a really thorough knowledge of your world. And if your fan group is as ravenous as hers, you'll have more to give them after the book is over.
That's all I have to give you on this topic.
Here's a summary for those of you who like to skim:
-Study patterns in books.
-Figure out what successful authors do while writing their books.
-Never stop looking for tips from well-to-do authors.
-Always brush your teeth.
OK, that last one wasn't in there. I just threw that out so you would go back and re-read it trying to find that particular sentence.
Until next time,
Monday, July 18, 2011
Writing Lessons from Harry Potter
So, after the last post I feel like I should fill you in.
I DID, in fact, finally go see the movie.
finally.
It was the most epic, heart racing, beautiful film out of all of them. By far surpasses the other 7. And I'm so very glad they made 8 instead of just 7.
They could have just make a movie for each chapter and I would have been cool with it.
But anyways. I'm about to go all SPOILER ALERT on you. So skip to the end if you don't want it ruined.
This deaf old couple sat right next to us. Don't get me wrong, I love old people just as much as the next guy, but no one should be allowed to talk during a movie.
old man: WHAT'S GOING ON? I CAN'T HEAR.
old lady: IT'S THE SNAKE! THE SNAKE IS A HORCRUX!
everyone else in the theater:
old man: WHO IS THAT? IS THAT SNAPE?
old lady: NO, SNAPE IS ABOUT TO DIE!
everyone in the theater:
old man: IS THAT HARRY? WHY IS HE DEAD? I THOUGHT HE KILLS VOLDEMORT?
old lady: HE'S NOT DEAD! HE'S JUST PRETENDING!
everyone else in the theater:
and it went on like that forever, because I was too busy going like this
to be like "Please, sir...
and then my friend was like "It's just a movie. It's not real. HARRY POTTER IS NOT REAL."
And I'm like
And I'm like
And the fight scene?
It was like a Black Eyed Peas competition in there.
Everyone whipped out their wands & it was like
A bunch of stuff exploded and people died, the end.
Which upsets me. Because I was really expecting more than that.
but anyways,
I think I've found my calling in life. I need to personally hunt down Rowling and force her to write new books.
Speaking of which, (I was totally kidding by the way)(sorta) we come to her writing methods.
Jo says her writing styles come from (surprise, surprise) studying.
Whoa now. Study, you say? You mean studying is something you do forever??
SERIOUSLY?!?
She studied books by authors like Charles Dickens, C.S. Lewis, Shakespeare, Leo Tolstoy and Jane Austen.
The tip I'm going to give you comes from a man who has studied (yep, again with the studying) writing, especially Harry Potter, for years. He's a pro.
His name is John Granger, (no relation to Hermoine) and here's one of the methods he's noticed in Rowling's writing.
It's called a "ring composition." Basically what that is is a "ring" where all the points build up, circle around, and allow the beginning and end to meet back up. The middle is to bring to attention once more the questions asked in the beginning and answered at the end. Most of you, if you are experienced, will go "yeah, yeah. I do that. Nothing new."
But here's the key:
Basically you take all the chapters and lay them out on the table. Now fold it in the middle.
Each chapter that touches the other is a reflection of each other, just like a mirror.
this mirror effect creates parallelisms in the story. Now don't go thinking that by "mirror" I mean that everything has to be the same. No. Parallelism is the key word here, it's not that it's literally a mirror and needs to be repeated.
Talk about deja vu. Your readers would be like:
haven't I read this somewhere before?
no, no, no.
"Parallelism in writing is the use of identical or equivalent syntactic constructions in corresponding clauses or phrases." (The American Heritage Dictionary)
Now you're probably the one looking like our friend Burt up there.
Basically what the smartie pants' that wrote up the American Heritage Dictionary are saying is that it's about your sentence structure. It's taking more than one idea and merging them into one. Basically taking your "mirror" chapters and using similarities small enough that your readers wont give you the Burt look, but strong enough to make it stick like glue in the reader's mind. Repetition is the key to remembrance. If you want someone to remember your book, use the "ring composition" and parallelism.
If you're talking about parallelism in a sentence, it would take two thoughts,
Josh hates potatoes.
Josh likes hitting people.
and merge them together, making it:
Josh likes potatoes and hitting people.
So let's look at it on a bigger scale now.
Remember that "ring" we're trying to build?
Your story shouldn't go like this:
Beginning. Middle. End.
It should go:
Beginning, middle and end.
and if you use the "ring" properly, it'll go:
Beginning, middle, end and beginning.
For extra clarity, your book should go something like this,
See Jane play poker. See Jane lose poker and her money. See Jane have to work for more money. See Jane play poker again.
It's a never-ending cycle but at the same time you leave no loose ends. (Unless you're writing more books.)
Now you have a circle and small connectors between your "mirror" chapters. Congratulations, you've created a web. With a really good story line, you'll catch and trap a bunch of loyal fans.
Now you have a circle and small connectors between your "mirror" chapters. Congratulations, you've created a web. With a really good story line, you'll catch and trap a bunch of loyal fans.
I really hope this makes sense, cause trying to explain it makes my head go
Until next time,
Sunday, July 17, 2011
Harry Potter 7 part 2 Premiere
SO!
Harry Potter, the worldwide phenomena, is coming to its final close.
If you know me, you know how much I seriously love this series, both the books and the movies.
I can't watch the movie tonight at midnight.
But I'm going tomorrow.
OH YEAH, just try and stop me.
I'm gonna walk in there like
and if people try and cut in line, I'm gonna be like
And if anyone talks during the movie
and then the movie is gonna start and I'm going to be like
and it's going to show this part
and I'll be like
And it's going to end and I'll be like
And then next morning I'll realize there are never going to be any more Harry Potter books or films and I'll be
and I'll realize I have the books & the movies and be like, why the heck am I not re-reading these right now??
and it'll be all good cause books are forever.
and that goes for books too. Because
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